I think it's got a lot of atmosphere, and generally good mixing, but the instrument textures need softening. The drums at 0:14 really need some sort of filter, to make them as if they were in the room next door; at the moment, they're just too piercing. Frankly, all the instruments could do with significant softening.
On the positive side, I really like the breakbeats. They're well done, and well placed. To be honest, if the instruments were softened, I'd be interested in licensing this for a Flash game - message me if you ever choose to give it a different mix, so I can get another look.
I'm totally down to make a different mix for you, where to send it though?
PM me with details?
Stunning song. Using for the intro to my next game - hopefully you'll get some serious plays come Christmas, when it ought to be released. You deserve to be less unknown.
Feel free to use it. Give credits. Avoid pneumatic drill rape.
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